
Every week we post six lines of a story of ours, a work-in-progress or from someone else’s work we recommend that has LGBT characters on Rainbow Snippets here https://www.facebook.com/groups/963484217054974
Looking back at my story “Life Is But a Dream,” from June 2016 https://authorjeffbaker.com/2016/06/27/life-is-but-a-dream-monday-flash-fiction-62716/ I see the influence of H. G. Wells’ s disaster story “The Star.” In my story, the Moon has spun off its orbit causing chaos on Earth. Lars and our narrator are surveying a boat left in a tree when the water
receded.
“You know, I hear the Maguire house up on Karlen’s Hill is staying pretty dry,” I said, staring up at the boat.
“Really?” Lars asked.
“Big bedroom,” I said. “Spare bedroom too, if you want.”
Okay, here’s the Happy-For-Now ending
Lars stared out at the receding water for a moment. Then he smiled and grabbed my hand. Life was too short not to take chances.
We started walking towards Karlen’s Hill. I glimpsed the Moon out of the corner of my eye. It seemed to be smiling at us.
Next week, something that pivots on a sneeze.—-jsb
“Life was too short not to take chances.” — Indeed! Especially when the moon spins out of orbit! ❤️
Yes! Yipe!
Sweet!
🙂 Thanks!
I love that moon is smiling
Yes! I’ve watched the Moon all my life and that line was just an inspiration at the last minute!
same here in the regards to the moon