Editing is Progress Too! (So is deleting, for that matter!) Progress Report for May25, 2020, from Jeff Baker.

Did a little historical research on the mystery I’m writing and found a couple of goofs I needed to correct (which I did!) and also found some things I could use to clarify the descriptions, and fixed that. Also read through what I have and deleted several things that are just repetitious. Looks better! As I said, deleting is progress too!

As for the reading, been making slow progress (I keep getting distracted and starting too late in the evening!) reading one of L. Frank Baum’s few adult short-stories: “The Suicide of Kiaros.” A bona-fide locked-room mystery, based apparently on Baum’s days working in an office and coming to work and finding the manager murdered in his office. I’ve gotten on a jag of reading Baum’s stories lately; they are seriously underrated!

That’s all for now!

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Progress Report for May 24, 2020 from Jeff Baker.

Wrote about 2 1/4 pages on the story I may send off in the Fall. Action, adventure, fantasy and swords!

That’s all for now!

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Actually Some Progress! Progress Report for May 23, 2020 by Jeff Baker.

Hadn’t worked on the mystery in a few days so I took the best writing advice I could ever give (maybe the only good advice!) and started writing at a part where I DID have some idea what to do and where it was going. Closed up a couple of plot holes too. Wrote about 1 and-a-forth pages. I’m behind schedule on this, but I figure if I keep at this I may have it done in two weeks.

That’s all for now.

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Wings On His Feet for Friday Flash Fics by Jeff Baker: An anniversary post, May 22, 2020.

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With Wings on His Feet

By Jeff Baker

 

The rain had stopped and the air was humid. Andre bounced on one foot, then the other and looked up and down the city street. He shook himself, feeling himself loosen. He’d never done it like this, and he sure as hell wasn’t going to run out there with the cars coming. He wasn’t a hundred percent sure it would work.

The light was red, the traffic stopped and the green “Walk” signal clicked on. Andre crouched down and ran. The footprints he left on the wet pavement sent up puffs of steam; by the time the steam rose more than an inch over the crosswalk, Andre was miles away.

A rush of cool air surrounded Andre like a whirlwind, cooling him as he barreled across the city in an instant. Cars seemed to be standing still, like a blurry photograph he’d seen online. He glanced down and saw the blur of his white socks and shoes. The shoes; the shoes he’d been given that weren’t like any other. In a few minutes, he left the city behind; he was on the highway but he probably wasn’t even in New York State anymore. He had practiced around the track when they had given him the shoes, and had run across the city before, but never gone this far. He stopped when he crossed a bridge and stared up at the sky. He didn’t feel tired. He’d get a bottle of water a few hundred miles down the road.

As the countryside blurred past him, he kept his eye on the highway signs, glad he’d memorized the route. He could see the trees and the fences and was glad for the blue sky; it had been raining in New York City before he started out, and he’d been worried about slipping in a puddle. Especially at a thousand miles per hour or whatever he was doing. He slowed down just a little; he’d seen a greenish sign up ahead: Now Entering Colorado. He sped up; he wasn’t sure about roaring up the Rocky Mountains and so, his next chance, he took the highway south. He’d hit the desert roads, maybe Texas through New Mexico where it was flat.

Andre wasn’t sure of the town, but he knew it was past the Colorado border, maybe in New Mexico when he slowed down with a screech and a cloud of dust, then walked into a convenience store, past a row of t-shirts for sale and grabbed a bottle of water. He walked outside the store sipping the water and gazed around. Flat and hot. A few minutes later, he crumpled up the empty bottle and tossed it in the trash can by the gas pumps as he accelerated onto the highway, the other cars seemingly standing still.

The desert blurred into pinks and reds and yellows. Andre could feel the heat through the swirl of cooling air. He wished he’d bought another water. He could see one of those truck stops out of the corner of his eye; he sped into it, grabbed a bottle of water from the cooler and sped out, the customers and clerks seemingly frozen in place. Then he thought the better of it, sped back in and tossed a buck on the counter by the register and sped off again.

He didn’t realize the glass doors to the truck stop and the cooler (which he’d opened at blinding speed) were shattering in the instant he left, though he was now miles away.

He coasted to regular speed by the beach, gawking at the Pacific Ocean. He stopped and stared, again taking it all in. He pulled out his cellphone and flipped to the GPS app. Directions to Hawaii. He stared out at the ocean; vast and wide, if he overshot, he couldn’t stop in the middle of the Pacific and check the device again. He really couldn’t even turn around without losing momentum on the water. But if he kept running, he wouldn’t sink: he’d done it before on a lake. He could just check into a hotel here in California. He stared at the ocean again.

Hawaii has hotels, he thought. He took a deep breath, and then streaked across the water as easily as he had on land.

 

—end—

 

AUTHOR’S NOTE: I posted the first of these near-weekly stories on May 25, 2016, so I’ve been doing them for four years now. I’ve written about 52 flash fiction stories a year, most of them for Friday Flash Fics and its predecessor Monday Flash Fics. That’s at least 208 stories! Right now, I have a story in the pipe that started out as a flash piece in 2018, and I have a couple of series characters such as the denizens of Demeter’s Bar, and the wandering Bryce Going (who first appeared in a weekly flash story) who have also appeared in longer stories (some of them actually published!) Like I’ve said, it is great practice and I recommend it to anyone who wants to learn to write short stories. Lots of changes in four years; I’ve been through three jobs, I got married officially in late 2016, I started writing full-time this past January and we lost my Dad about two months ago. These stories have been a constant through it all.

So, I have to thank ‘Nathan Burgoine, Helena Stone and the other moderators of these weekly forays into fiction and all my fellow contributors. As well as all the readers; your input usually makes my day! And, my family. Mom & Dad, my Brother and his family, and my husband Darryl. Thanks to all!

            As for the weekly posting of tales and yarns, I have no intention of stopping! As they used to say on Johnny Carson’s Tonight Show: More To Come.

                                                             ————jeff baker, May 23, 2020.

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(Not Much) Progress Report for May 21, 2020 by Jeff Baker.

For what it’s worth I finished the Friday Flash story.  Got a magazine in the mail I’m writing a story for, not open for submissions until later in the year, reading through it. Nice, fun pulp stuff. Slept too late (was up too late! 🙂 ) and went to the bank and the Pharmacy. Bank lobby open; everyone’s social-distancing. Found out the computer records say my insurance has been inactive since January. No it hasn’t. Spent a while on the phone trying to fix it; only found that the place I need to call isn’t open until 8:00a.m.

Gotta post the Flash story. And the new pic.

That’s about all.

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Readin’ and Writin’. Progress Report for May 19/20th, 2020 by Jeff Baker

Wrote some more on the Friday Flash story on Tuesday, should have finished it. On Wednesday, I got two pieces of mail; “Science Fiction the Early Years” by Everett F. Bleiler. This hefty volume (about 1,000 words!) is a guide to science fiction stories “from the earliest times” to about 1930 with several thousand entries. It was a little pricey; $60 +, but any book by Bleiler is worth it! (There is a second volume covering stories from 1930 onward.) Given my recent fascination with 19th-early 20th Century Sci-fi, this was a worthwhile purchase, one I will be using for a long time. I mainly bought it for information on the stories by W. L. Alden about Professor Van Wagener, who specializes in “silly inventions” (as Bleiler calls them) and were collected in the now-very pricy volume “Van Wagener’s Ways,” which, amazingly, has not been released in a digital edition, nor available at Project Guttenberg. There is one story (about making cats fly to chase invasive species of birds) that is read on a podcast and one other was reprinted seventy years ago, but that is all. Several other of Alden’s stories and books are available, including works about canoeing; which he helped bring (as a competitive sport) to America.

As for that other story…

I spent about ten bucks (counting shipping and handling) and got a copy of the second issue of The Magazine of Fantasy and Science Fiction (the first to add “and Science Fiction” to the title) and it was well worth it! The Winter-Spring 1950 issue mainly has reprints including “The Volcanic Valve” by Alden, where Van Wagener tries to control volcanic eruptions for fun and profit with awful results! Other reprints include Robert Arthur’s fun “Postpaid to Paradise,” and Miriam Allen De Ford’s “The Last Generation?” The issue hit the jackpot with several classics in their first appearance: “Not With a Bang” by Damon Knight,” “The Gnurrs Come From the Voodvork Out” by R. Bretnor, “World of Arlesia” by Margaret St. Clair, and two of the first Gavagan’s Bar stories by DeCamp and Pratt. (There is an effort to collect the stories of Margaret St. Clair, but Miriam DeFord’s Sci-fi, fantasy and mystery stories deserve a modern collection.)

MFSF #2 certainly deserves a reprinting too (sometimes classic magazines get that!) Fun stories, informative introductions by editors Boucher and McComas and the nifty cover, all of which offer promise of good things to come. Promise which was fulfilled as MFSF is still in operation. That seventy year-old issue still feels fresh and exciting, even though some of the stories are of an earlier time.

That’s all for now.

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Progress Report; May 18, 2020 from Jeff Baker.

Surprised myself by knuckling down and working on the mystery. Rearranged chunks of the story, bringing introductions of our detective, suspects and victim early on. Makes more sense and will help the story flow. Also worked on the Friday Flash story for the week. This will be my fourth anniversary weekly flash fiction post, which is something!

That’s all for now!

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On Board With a Progress Report for May 16/17, 2020, from Jeff Baker.

Wrote some of the Friday Flash story; “With Wings on His Feet” as well as a brand-new story inspired by a reference to a Bruce Coville story (on his birthday!) and a memory of the Renaissance Faires at Newman. This morning I surprised myself and wrote two (!!!) pages on the “On Board the Ghannidor-Ra” story from about three years ago. There’s a sword-and-planet-pulp-type market opening up this Fall and I intend to have between 2000 to 7000 words done by then.

As for my plan to have the mystery story finished by today, since I haven’t worked on it for a few days, that plan is out! Give it a couple of weeks: I may have to re-arrange the whole timeline but I can do it! I have some notes written and if I knuckle down I can do it!

The Quarantine schedule seems to be to stay up until about six a.m. and sleep ’till two and then get up, eat, ride the bike, check e-mail and the like, watch a couple of tv shows (which are practically sacrosanct here) and get around to writing after twelve-thirty.  For the last few days I’ve been telling myself that I’d get the writing done in the evening or even afternoon but it gets shunted back to after midnight. Oh well, I’m not knocking getting two pages done, and I will get more done later. Probably.

That’s all for now!

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The Parliament of Gulls. Friday Flash Fics by Jeff Baker for May 15, 2020.

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The Parliament of Gulls

By Jeff Baker

 

Since time immemorial, the seagulls have swarmed over the beaches, particularly near people, awaiting their food scraps or offerings of tidbits. But also, since seagulls took flight, there has been the Parliament of Gulls.

It meets rarely, for it is not easy for individual seagulls to co-ordinate travel to one point, even after the messengers, usually a swift-moving albatross brings word that the Parliament has been called, and representatives of the gulls must be chosen to convene and sit and hear and debate. Such was the time, one summer’s day.

“The matter before us is clear,” said the First Gull. “We have become too dependent upon the tall ones, They Who Walk The Beach.”

“They bring food,” said the Second Gull. “I am native to this very beach and I have benefited from our cooperation with the tall ones. We swoop and fly in a great tower and They Who Walk The Beach will throw food our way. Food is not always easy to find in this world.”

“There are fish,” said the Third Gull. “Readily available in most of the world’s seas and rivers. I myself have attracted fish with offerings of pieces of bread…”

“Bread deposited by They Who Walk The Beach,” the First Gull interrupted. “You have become dependent.”

“There is carrion,” said the Fourth Gull. “Death is ever-present with a ready supply of food. They Who Walk are just an addition to the world’s larder, a larder made for the race of Gulls.”

“There are others, remember,” said the Second Gull. “Bears, other birds, foxes…”

“There are no other birds save Gulls,” said the First Gull. “They Who Walk The Beach can destroy their fellows. They may one day destroy all of their race. Then where will we be if by that time we have forgotten all but how to perform for treats?”

“The young have their instincts,” the Fourth Gull said.

“The young have their hunger,” the First Gull said.

“We have adapted before…” began the Second Gull. Then they stopped. They could hear the crinkle of an opened bag; smell the tang of food bits. As one, they rose into the air, to swarm and drift above the Beach-Walker, and dive as she tossed the small chips of food.

 

—end—

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Progress Report by Jeff Baker, May 14, 2020.

Was lazy and well-fed and didn’t have any real intention of working on the WIP tonight (actually early this morning, around 2:00am) but I read through it and started re-arranging some of it. It exists in big chunks, labeled things like THEY FIND THE BODY, and INSERT HERE, and ENDING. (I do have the ending written at least!) Managed to fill a couple of plot holes. A lesson to writers to work on stuff even when you don’t want to work at it.

That’s all for now.

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